nice first upload:) you might wanna crank up the volume a bit though
Great job animating this! The only thing I can say is the transition after the kid picks up the doll seems to make it a little unclear. I'm guessing holding the doll made the kid turn into a rabbit, but I think that could've been communicated a little better. Otherwise, really nice work!
Thank you very much, I'll keep that in consideration in future animations.
You might want to work on your pacing. Also make sure you're communicating what's going on in each scene
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